For Friday Fictioneers.
Copyright Ted Strutz
The crew seemed reluctant to impart any details of the ship’s history, but Peter prized it out of a ship’s mate that evening after dinner.
“It were 1984 or so. We was carryin’ food and the like to Africa. Part of that ‘feed the world’ thing. Coming back, we finds a stowaway. ‘E runs through with a lit candle and sets this dining-room afire. ‘E was killed ‘n buried at sea.”
Peter glanced up. The image of a smiling boy appeared in the window, fire about him. Peter turned around.
Nothing.
When he returned his gaze to the glass, the boy was gone.
(Word count 100).
How cool-I love ghost stories:-)
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Thank you 🙂 Glad you liked it 🙂
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:-)yes,I did
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Alice,
Great, creepy tale, I see ghosts on this ferry, too. Something about a deserted ferry, boat, or abandoned vessel at sea. Also, welcome to the Fictioneers.
Amy
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Thank you! Yes, it does lend itself to the paranormal 😉 Something about ominous emptiness of inside and out of the window… the spirits are restless 😉
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Yeah… this photo was just made for you, wasn’t it? Good one.
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Thank you Ted 🙂
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Dear Alice,
There’s something about the deserted ferry that’s inspiring creepiness. Nice one. And welcome to Friday Fictioneers. It’s a lot like The Hotel California. You can check out anytime you like, but you can never leave.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you Rochelle 🙂 My mind just went there with this photo. I was in a support chat room that also resembled Hotel California (in fact it was one of the room’s songs). That room was where I met my now husband of 4 years 🙂 We went there until yahoo closed all of their rooms last year…die-hards that we are 😉
Thank you for the warm welcome!!
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Creepy! Nicely done!
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Thank you 🙂 I seem to do creepy with increasing ease, these days… not sure why 😉
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